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my mind |
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torn in two |
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uncontrolable |
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shoot me now |
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one day |
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kill me now |
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who will help the fallen? |
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no more |
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to be set free |
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who will help the fallen?
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Created on 2-26-08
who will help the fallen? who will help the one in dire need of someone? who will help lead me onto the right path?who will help me to stop my wrong doing? who is willing to pick me up when i feel lost and down? who will help me stop this ?
Please Login to post comments| On March 2nd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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wow. just wow |
| On February 29th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Compelling! I like it! |
