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Created on 6-21-08
your lips your touch
is this too much
i dont ever want to loose you
your my dream come true
ur the smile on my face
oh how i love your sweet embrace
your the beat of my heart
your the good part
your the best that has ever happen to me
your the reason i see
that love was meant for me
Please Login to post comments| On July 1st 2008 jaylynn142434 Said : | |
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awww. this reminds me of my best friend and her boyfriend. great poem. =] |
| On June 29th 2008 nlis2kool Said : | |
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Thats great!!!!!!!! |
| On June 22nd 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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soooo sweet |
| On June 22nd 2008 JakeBozz Said : | |
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Boo. |
| On June 22nd 2008 MaraLicious177 Said : | |
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good, but puncuation would help! |
| On June 21st 2008 duhimallie94 Said : | |
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awesome! ur really good |
| On June 21st 2008 liz720614 Said : | |
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amazing. love it:] |
| On June 21st 2008 belenlovespooh Said : | |
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OMG I ♥ this poem :).......REally nice :P..keep me updated for new poems :) |
| On June 21st 2008 pinkslip300 Said : | |
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itz more than good......damn itz freakin awsomnezz!!!
♥♥ |
| On June 21st 2008 mkkelsey Said : | |
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I love this one as well.
Kmp. |
| On June 21st 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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This is so true. It reminds me of something that I would write. Good work on this! :) |
