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my love

Views (331) Love Created on 6-20-08 Flag

those fail i sought alone

perfect voice translating whole

my feelings shout soft love

words grow good above

what true love couldnt be found

like a beautiful flower growing from the ground

getting stronger each day

molded perfectly like clay

personified speaks emotion 

entwined expresses deviotion

my end wouldnt last days

little desire need to say 

 

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On June 23rd 2008 Laralei Said :
Laralei I have not read a decent couplet in a long time. Good job.
On June 22nd 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll I really like it. It's different from anything I've read today. Nice :)
On June 22nd 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia loved it......
On June 22nd 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 intriguing. and interesting...i like it
On June 22nd 2008 JWalker2406 Said :
JWalker2406 Hey this is a good poem. I really like it! Great job :D Lizzy(muse4apoem) asked me to read it, said it was great and she was right! :D
On June 21st 2008 CSLimeWriter Said :
CSLimeWriter Cool.
On June 21st 2008 JakeBozz Said :
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On June 21st 2008 JakeBozz Said :
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On June 21st 2008 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster I HATE FLOWERS! this one time, this kid billy payed me a nickel to eat one during recess
On June 21st 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x aww this is amazing. All of your poems make me speechless. Very nice!
On June 21st 2008 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet it was good...would leave more but my head hurts...thank muse for telling me about it
On June 20th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem OMG I Im going to tell people about this poem! It's so great! "Like a beautiful flower growing from the ground." That's my favorite line. Anyway I hope you get more votes. As I tell my friends to read this! :)
On June 20th 2008 hypnotizer Said :
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On June 20th 2008 onelove6fs Said :
onelove6fs i love this one! check out mine.
On June 20th 2008 Arkantasa Said :
Arkantasa This is very good!
On June 20th 2008 DD1991 Said :
DD1991 i LOVE IT TIFFY YOU AND DEBO ARE SOOOOOO PERFECT TOGETHER YOU ARE A GREAT PO0ET KEEP WRITTING AND CONGRATS ON WINNING THE POETRY CONTEST ON POETRY.COM THATS alot OF MONEY LUCKY YOU