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LAST POEM

Views (100) Anger Created on 6-14-08 Flag

This poem will be my last

I told you i was dying on the inside

and now im dying on the out

Ive busted opened my head

broke a finger

all out of anger

I cant take it anymore

I have no place to go

nothing to do

this will be my final goodbye

life is no longer fun

pain has taken its toll

broken glass on the floor

holes in the wall

my anger has ran out

the blood runs down my face

my roon is now a mess

but i no longer care

my tears will never run dry

im sorry for the people i will hurt

but im tired of myself hurting

im tired of my heart beating

this is my final poem

my last goodbye

 

(sorry if its not that good like i said i busted my head open and i was really dizzy when i wrote it) 

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On July 7th 2008 6615sweet Said :
6615sweet if u r dead...may ur soul rest in piece...if not...this poem is really good by the way....
On June 22nd 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia Ohhhh,never ever do that.Sometimes,i get really depressed,sad and feel like no one cares but i never try to do these things.I hope not.Don't give up on life babe,you are not alone feeling like this.A lot of people are.When you give up then you are a loser.
On June 15th 2008 jaylynn142434 Said :
jaylynn142434 please dont die!!! i wont have ur amazing poems to read anymore!!!!!!!!!!!
On June 14th 2008 smile4evr Said :
smile4evr PLEASE DON'T GO! we all go through some hard times!! the best way to get through them is talk about them with loved ones or a really close friends! U r A great writer and this is a great poem! keep it up and hang in there!!!!!!
On June 14th 2008 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster yous gonna croak? its nice to die, just make sure time is ready. and i beleive a natural death or overdose are really the only fun ways of going. unless your in an intense bicycle race, against the cyborgs, and you must win for the humans. but, you fall off a cliff. another fun way to go is to be shot down in battle, and then your war buddy or lover comes to your aid, and you die in there arms. if its the war buddy, he seeks revenge against the villan. and, if its the lover, then.... she could get revenge. OR, another fun way to die is watching a good episode of happy days, or a great movie, and then all of the sudden, you implode.
On June 14th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem My god! Don't leave! This has a nice beat to it. I have been going threw a block. There is a few people on here I know that are going threw blocks. One dose not hurt forever. So just try to look on the brighter side. For in this poem your hiding a little. It's good to share.