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I lost me |
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my secrets in control |
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someones doom |
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to late |
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This IS truley amazing 0.0 |
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was it true |
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on the outside on the inside |
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drunk driving |
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dead beet dad part one |
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the phone is ringing |
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the inmates life |
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you took my heart |
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dead beat dad part one and two |
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gift of an angel |
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broken law of love |
my stupid mistake
sorry i lied
sorry i did that to you
i didnt mean to hurt you
but the words just came through
i guess i couldnt handle
the love you gave to me
but you no what
i love you too
but the words just came to me
couldnt say it before
but it feels right now
my hearts pounding
for your words
but its too late
ur gone forever....
my stupid mistake
of letting you go
my stupid mistake
of walking away
my stupid mistake
for telling those lies
my stupid mistake
for letting you cry
my stupid mistake
for letting you by
now how can you look me in the eyes
without seeing all the things i did too you
after i hurt you
you still love me
not gonna make the mistakes again
of letting you go
im gonna hold you in my arms
and catch your tears when you cry
cause baby i aint gonna let you go no more
your mine, for the time, your mine, this time will
last forever
ill love you till the day i die
| On August 1st 2008 barbarian1 Said : | |
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its a wonderful poem |
| On July 23rd 2008 bobela2 Said : | |
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its totally awsum |
| On June 20th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said : | |
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Very good. I like this ALOT! |
| On June 13th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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I can't beleive someone put a chain thing on your page! Keep up the writing! This is a real good poem! Sad but good! ~Kudos~ |
| On June 10th 2008 liz720614 Said : | |
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wow. great job:) |
| On June 8th 2008 bmullinax0517 Said : | |
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i loved this.....especially because of how i felt about someone a few years ago |
| On June 3rd 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Once again~ I realy like this one! :) |
| On June 2nd 2008 MeVelvetRose17 Said : | |
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wow its beautiful! it sounds kind of like a song to me:) |
| On June 1st 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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kind of creepy, lol. "your MINE, i will hold you foreverrrr." still, liked the poem. whoever this is for must feel very lucky |
| On June 1st 2008 bbdolle Said : | |
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omfg....... i love this one soooo much it's amazing......great job
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| On June 1st 2008 JustifyMisery Said : | |
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WOW this is great! i love it!! check some of my poems out?!? i would love to know what you think! |
| On June 1st 2008 crazycookie101 Said : | |
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PLEASE DONT READ THIS. YOU WILL GET KISSED ON THE NEAREST POSSIBLE FRIDAY BY THE LOVE OF YOUR LIFE. TOMORROW WILL BE THE BEST DAY OF YOUR LIFE. HOWEVER IF YOU DONT POST THIS COMMENT TO AT LEAST 3 VIDEOS YOU WILL DIE WITHIN 2 DAYS. NOW UV STARTED READIN DIS DUNT STOP THIS IS SO SCARY. xSEND THIS OVER TO 5 QUIZZES IN 143 MINUTES WHEN UR DONE PRESS F6 AND UR CRUSHES NAME WILL APPEAR ON THE SCREEN IN BIG LETTERS. THIS IS SO SCARY CAUSE IT ACTUALLY WORKS 6
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| On May 31st 2008 LostAndLoved Said : | |
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i love this!!!! |
| On May 31st 2008 jessicabaybay Said : | |
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awhh. i really likee this :)
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| On May 31st 2008 smile4evr Said : | |
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i felt this once to. love it |
| On May 31st 2008 chibibabe12 Said : | |
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true straight forward with a bit of agony, broken heart and lonely soul oozing from the corners... |


