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cant you see my love
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Created on 5-30-08
cant you see i love you
ive wanted to say it so badly
its never felt so true
till i meet you
i love it when you hold me
and look into my eyes
and when you say you can see
the beauty thats inside
but my hearts been broken too many times
its got me afraid to ever say those words again
its gotten into my mind
that i love you is deadly when put together
they can save and they can heal
but they also can break
u never know when thier real
or when thier fake
so one day i hope you really take a look
to see those words inside
they want to come out
yet they hide
ive wanted to say it so badly
its never felt so true
till i meet you
i love it when you hold me
and look into my eyes
and when you say you can see
the beauty thats inside
but my hearts been broken too many times
its got me afraid to ever say those words again
its gotten into my mind
that i love you is deadly when put together
they can save and they can heal
but they also can break
u never know when thier real
or when thier fake
so one day i hope you really take a look
to see those words inside
they want to come out
yet they hide
Please Login to post comments| On August 1st 2008 barbarian1 Said : | |
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love... pain and joy, never knowing which one it will be. great poem |
| On June 3rd 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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It's really sweet :) Keep writing. You're good at it. |
| On June 1st 2008 bobblehead310 Said : | |
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thats really good. great job |
| On June 1st 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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aww, lucky wittle DICKENS. thanks for the read |
| On May 31st 2008 dhmm Said : | |
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omg this true
love the poems |
| On May 30th 2008 chibibabe12 Said : | |
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so fukin true......oh my god! |
| On May 30th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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aww i love this poem! |
