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Miscarrige
i cant tell if its good or bad
i cant tell if im happy or sad
loosing a child
makes ur mind go wild
i know i was too young too have one
and taking care of it wouldn't have been fun
but it was still apart of me
and i wish people would see
how much i hurt in and out side
cutting is my way too hide
i know its too late
to take away my mistakes
i would've tried
if the baby hadn't of died
i think im allergic to the fire
i need to stop walking on thin wire
i started smoking really bad
all this shit has made me mad
loosing a child is no fun
but at least i still have my special some one
he makes sure im never down
and when skys are cloudy he brings the sun around
| On August 18th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I was just looking to see if you wrote of your miscarriage as well. Indeed you did. It's been over two years since I lost my baby and things have changed significantly in my life since then. (this may get kinda long-sorry in advance!) Your words at the beginning of this poem really grabbed my attention- "I can't tell if it's good or bad" I truly believe that everything happens for a reason. And though I was crushed when I lost my baby(and still it hurts) I look back now and can understand. The man I was w/ was starting to get abusive and we had broken up before I got pregnant. We were just starting to work things out again (against my better judgement even then) when we found out. I was so excited about being pregnant. But I would have been foolish to think that the child would be born into a stable family. The doctors actually weren't sure if I had miscarried or if it was a tubal pregnancy-they just knew that something wasn't right. It was almost two weeks after the initial miscarriage that we knew for sure. It was a day or two after the final answer and my boyfriend got drunk and came to my work and started a fight. I was already a mess and on top of that, I had him screaming and yelling and calling me names. That is actually when and why I left him for good. Okay- my point..That God knew what He was doing. I hold on dearly to that and it helps me to get through each day! I pray that my husband (whom I love dearly and would never lay a finger on me) and I will be able to get pregnant soon. |
| On May 15th 2008 AudreyJones55 Said : | |
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i love this one. is it true for you or someone else :[ |
| On May 1st 2008 liz720614 Said : | |
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i love it. amazing. :] and im sorry:[ |
| On May 1st 2008 raywiley69 Said : | |
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wow..=(...i love it |


