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Why?
we're over we're through
then why do i find my mind
going back to you
where over for good
then why if you asked me back
in a second i would
we weren't meant to be
then why in my heart
i still see you and me
i cant love you
then why is my heart
telling me thats not true
things where going to fast
then why am i telling myself
without her it would of last
we both made the choice
then why do i find myself calling
just to hear your voice
your on the bottom of my list
then why do i find for you
im cutting my wrist
i sit here and cry
holding this gum
wanting to die
a shot in the head
itll be over
ill be dead
this is how its suppose to be
i can no longer take the pain
i pull the trigger for you and me
| On August 1st 2008 barbarian1 Said : | |
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sad poem but well writen |
| On June 22nd 2008 onelove6fs Said : | |
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another great poem from a great poet |
| On June 21st 2008 mkkelsey Said : | |
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Okay.
And you think I'm good?!?!
Ha.
I love this one.
I will definetly keep you posted. |
| On June 18th 2008 bowzlady1 Said : | |
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LOVE THIS LOVE THIS LOVE THIS SOOO MUCH!!! |
| On June 15th 2008 petersonsv Said : | |
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very good i've written something like this when i get back home I'll put it on |
| On June 10th 2008 MeVelvetRose17 Said : | |
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"i pull the trigger for you and me"
that is absolutly amazing! idk no y but that one line screams at me...i loved this poem absolutly loved it. your amazing!! |
| On May 27th 2008 apwilsmiles Said : | |
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whoow! totally amazed! i like it.. i can relate to it! |
| On May 3rd 2008 smile4evr Said : | |
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this is amazing...great work
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| On May 2nd 2008 laritasquirrel Said : | |
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I felt the same way for a long time. You have some seriously amazing talent. |
| On April 21st 2008 darkemokid1415 Said : | |
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this was an amazing poem. I Loved it |
| On April 21st 2008 darkemokid1415 Said : | |
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this was an amazing poem. I Loved it |
| On April 20th 2008 Darkenedsoul21 Said : | |
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Nice job! Very creative. I love it! |
| On April 20th 2008 lovin5life Said : | |
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i luv it!!!!!!! |
| On April 19th 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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loved it. |
| On April 19th 2008 bigZ139 Said : | |
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i really like this... |
| On April 19th 2008 dropdeadsucka Said : | |
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Simply true. |
| On April 18th 2008 Jerrit72 Said : | |
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THIS POEM KICKS ASS,.....FROM JERRIT UR ONLINE POEM FRIEND
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| On April 18th 2008 shanicetucker Said : | |
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this is good |
| On April 18th 2008 bbdolle Said : | |
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OMGoodness!!! this is amazing i love the line"then why if you asked me back, in a second i would"!!!!!! i love it soo much it says so much and not only does it show/tell your feelings it tells/talks about others!!!!
love always Shannon |
| On April 18th 2008 JAiDyLeE Said : | |
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very good. i like it |
| On April 18th 2008 gusty13 Said : | |
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nice i like this poem it sounds like i feel all the time |


