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you broke the law of loveRate this Poem
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I lost me |
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my secrets in control |
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someones doom |
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to late |
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This IS truley amazing 0.0 |
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was it true |
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on the outside on the inside |
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the inmates life |
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you took my heart |
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broken law of love |
broken law of love
i made an oath to you that night
that we would never part
But you broke the law of love
you tried to justify what was wrong
you were my incense
i loved being around you
you were my high place
when i was feeling down
i poured you my blood
i gave you my sacrafice
in my weak offering
you shunned me
you broke my soul
i started to degenerate
i told you, you had to make your electic
it was ether me or her
i was all ready ethereal
when you threw those words at me
you chose her
so i let it be what you wanted
you didnt even have the decency
to pick up the mess you made
you just left my heart
shattered all over the ground
i had inscribed your name
into my precious heart
and there it remains
its still there today
i was to engrossed with you
i forgot i had a life
so when it was over
i had a hard time adjusting
i tried to ignore the pain
and the dreams i have of you
but i carved your name into my mind
and there it remains today
| On September 21st 2008 DD1991 Said : | |
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WE going to kick Debos arse!!!!
DD & Katie |
| On July 24th 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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this is awesome i've felt that way before very powerful good work! |
| On July 23rd 2008 bobela2 Said : | |
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its awsum thats how i was like when my boyfriend broke up with me... like GOSH thats exactly how i felt |
| On April 16th 2008 tiffany1058 Said : | |
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please comment on what you think about it |


