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broken law of love

Views (162) Love Created on 4-16-08 Flag

i made an oath to you that night

that we would never part

But you broke the law of love

you tried to justify what was wrong

you were my incense

i loved being around you

you were my high place

when i was feeling down

i poured you my blood

i gave you my sacrafice

in my weak offering

you shunned me

you broke my soul

i started to degenerate

i told you, you had to make your electic

it was ether me or her

i was all ready ethereal 

when you threw those words at me

you chose her

so i let it be what you wanted

you didnt even have the decency

to pick up the mess you made

you just left my heart

shattered all over the ground

i had inscribed your name

into my precious heart

and there it remains

its still there today

i was to engrossed with you

i forgot i had a life

so when it was over

i had a hard time adjusting

i tried to ignore the pain

and the dreams i have of you

but i carved your name into my mind

and there it remains today 

 

 

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On September 21st 2008 DD1991 Said :
DD1991 WE going to kick Debos arse!!!! DD & Katie
On July 24th 2008 UnSane420 Said :
UnSane420 this is awesome i've felt that way before very powerful good work!
On July 23rd 2008 bobela2 Said :
bobela2 its awsum thats how i was like when my boyfriend broke up with me... like GOSH thats exactly how i felt
On April 16th 2008 tiffany1058 Said :
tiffany1058 please comment on what you think about it