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my tummys gettin biggerRate this Poem
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I lost me |
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my secrets in control |
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someones doom |
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This IS truley amazing 0.0 |
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was it true |
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on the outside on the inside |
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drunk driving |
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dead beet dad part one |
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the phone is ringing |
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the inmates life |
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you took my heart |
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dead beat dad part one and two |
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gift of an angel |
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dead beat dad part one and two
PART ONE
i hope you do love me
i hope you are true
because im prenant
and the daddy is you
please dont get mad
its not the end of your fun
we'll be together
with a daughter or son
dont be a dead beat dad
i know this feels wrong
but my tummys gettin bigger
it wont be long
i think about you and me
all the time
i know youll be a great daddy
just dont end up like mine
please dont let OUR child
grow up without a dad
you dont think the child would notice
or be angry and sad
but YOU wont be there
YOU wont hear the child cry
all because daddy
didnt wanna try
so sit down and think about it
i know this is wild
but you really need to think
this is the LIFE of a child
PART TWO
i cant believe he left me
i thought he really cared
but how am i suppose to tell the child
that his daddy got scared
what am i gonna say
when the child askes why is daddy dead
that he didnt wanna be in our lifes
so he shot himself in the head
how could you be so dense
how can you be so low
that you had to take your life
so the pain wouldnt show
it was selfish of him
for commiting suicide
because he just didnt take his life
he killed the child inside
this isnt suppose to be
a daddy suppose to be there
but i guess this is life
and lifes not fair
PART THREE WILL BE ON IT SOON
| On September 21st 2008 renesmom4 Said : | |
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Wow I really like these poems you speak trueness!!! Wicked Awesome!!!!!!! |
| On September 20th 2008 kriskris222 Said : | |
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Damn. That's sad. Good job though! |
| On August 23rd 2008 deathafying666 Said : | |
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damn that was deep |
| On August 20th 2008 Babyboo1507 Said : | |
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I'm so sorry, Gosh you go thru so many things I wish some-thing could go right for you. Hopefully your child will understand one day and not ever blame themself. |
| On August 18th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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Wow. And I'm going to assume this second part is true as well. That would have to be hard. I'll never understand suicide and this situation would have to be extra tough w/ the pregnancy and all. My heart goes out to you for everything that you've been through. |
| On July 24th 2008 liz720614 Said : | |
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wow....very sad ;( |


