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dead beet dad part one
i hope you do love me
i hope you are true
because im pregnant
and the daddy is you
please dont get mad
its not the end of our fun
we'll be together
with a daughter or son
dont be a dead beet dad
i know this feels wrong
but my tummys getting bigger
it wont be long
i think about us
and our child all the time
i know you'll be a good daddy
just dont be like mine (author note-my dad left before i was born)
please dont let our child
grow up without a dad
you think the child wont notice
or be angry and sad
but thats right you wont be there
you wont hear the child cry
all because his daddy
didnt want to try
please think about it
just for awile
but you gotta think
this is the life of a child
| On August 23rd 2008 deathafying666 Said : | |
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that poem was boss |
| On August 20th 2008 Babyboo1507 Said : | |
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Every guy needs to read this before he decides to not be in his childs life just cuz he's scared or doesn't want to grow up. You let em know it's not about them it's about the child and that's the message that needs to be let out. |
| On August 18th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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This one is powerful and the message is one that I feel quite strongly about myself. It's not because my parents didn't care-they did and they were/are wonderful parents. But it's because I'm having problems with getting pregnant and it just pisses me off to see all the people who have kids and don't take care of them or just use them for sympathy or against one another. I noticed below you said that you had a miscarriage-I feel for you, hon. My first and only pregnancy ended that way as well. It still tears me up inside, though I know the time just wasn't right. I've written a similar poem though mine was directed to the worthless mothers of the world. Anyhow, I really loved this poem though it is very sad. |
| On June 20th 2008 onelove6fs Said : | |
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aw sad yet i love it |
| On May 31st 2008 XOXbAbybOO Said : | |
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aww im rele sorry i know alot of ppl that had misscarriages |
| On April 26th 2008 tiffany1058 Said : | |
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yes its true
but unfortunately i had a miscarriage |
| On April 13th 2008 lostvampire09 Said : | |
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great poem
is it true? |
| On April 13th 2008 2543 Said : | |
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Is this a personal story?
it's very good though. |
| On April 13th 2008 smartb18 Said : | |
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i love this....the poem has tons of emotion in it, its really good....i must ask, is this a personal story? |


