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he was only a little boy then the carRate this Poem
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I lost me |
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my secrets in control |
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someones doom |
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to late |
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This IS truley amazing 0.0 |
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was it true |
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on the outside on the inside |
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drunk driving |
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dead beet dad part one |
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the phone is ringing |
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the inmates life |
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you took my heart |
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dead beat dad part one and two |
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gift of an angel |
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broken law of love |
drunk driving
how could this happen
i cant believe my eyes
its got to be false
its got to be a lie
it cant be true
he cant be dead
i wont believe it
its got to be all in my head
i got to be dreaming
this silent nightmare
i wish it wasnt real
this just isnt fair
he was just a little boy
then the car came his way
he didnt make it across
now he'll never see another day
if only they werent drinking
if only they were right
then the would have seen the boy
clearly in thier sight
let me tell you more
that wasnt the worst part
they drove away and left him
ignoring the weak beat from the boys heart
they could have saved him
they could have kept him alive
with only three numbers
the boy would've died
so i hoped they enjoyed their drinks
i hope they had their fun
because once i catch them
ill do what they did to my son
DEDICATED TO A MOM I KNOW WHO LOST HER SON TO A DRUNK DRIVER
| On September 17th 2008 ruskiya Said : | |
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OH WOW!! this is truley some amazing writing! |
| On August 20th 2008 Babyboo1507 Said : | |
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omg..That is so sad, I hope your friend is doing ok, that's got to be one of the hardest things to go thru. |
| On August 20th 2008 liz720614 Said : | |
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this is a really good poem. keep up the good work! |
| On August 1st 2008 Sarwa123 Said : | |
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wow, this is really deep i really like it! |


