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This is the first poem I wrote. at age13Rate this Poem
My Poems
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Here, the Words of Christ |
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Broken |
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Apologies |
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Come To Him |
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I Forgive You |
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Daily Death |
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Hypocrite |
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Don't Even Try |
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On the Inside |
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Change |
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Trembled Terror |
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Resemption |
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Off the Script |
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A Scared, Little Kid |
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She Took His Hand |
Daily Death
Why can't you trust
Put your back up on that cross.
Death does come to someone
Who laid down His life to die for us
I walk this daily death
I come to the Lord and cripple
I die daily against the circumstances
I die daily to become a desciple
I die dailt to follow God
| On March 9th 2007 diet7up Said : | |
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"this poem is still my heart" like i said i dont like to comment on stuff like this but i'm going to rate you up for saying this poem is still my heart i like that |
| On February 18th 2007 sincerelyichab Said : | |
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nice stuff man, and hahaha, give the man some slack, aka Jack Daniels..(scott stapp that is) |
| On February 11th 2007 thethreatIF Said : | |
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haha. so true, so true. lol |
| On February 9th 2007 Jmac44870 Said : | |
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nice poem... Better hope Scott Stapp never reads it though.. It will be a verse in a Creed song |
| On January 29th 2007 BaByGiRl937 Said : | |
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its really good!!! |
| On January 29th 2007 SarahJo85 Said : | |
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very good poem! |
| On January 29th 2007 thethreatIF Said : | |
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oh shoot, just realized i put dailt instead of daily. sorry folks. |
| On January 29th 2007 thethreatIF Said : | |
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i wrote this poem in the middle of the night in the dark. i still have the original paper that i scribbled this poem on to. this poem is still my heart. |


