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mc |
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left alone |
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Emotion |
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Scarring the World is Serious Business |
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As I Look Into the Mirror... |
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I Should Have Listened |
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I'm On The Other Line |
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Respond |
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I Was On A Late Night Train |
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I Hope The Rain Never Stops |
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Two Shots Left |
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You're Not |
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Just Stop It |
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work in progress |
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Another Riddle Without A Solution |
Your Pain Reversal
You turn away from me,
Drink up your favorite poison.
I tried to save you,
But you walked away.
Now I'm watching you,
And everything you do.
Is it worth the pain,
That life will put you through?
It's okay, I know it's not,
I watch your soul rot.
I was your water,
My pretty flower.
Now you'll wither away.
I'll take comfort in that.
I won't tell you to come back,
Or that I need you to survive.
I've got a perfect record,
You're the one that lied.
Too late to say sorry,
And say that it's alright.
But I still see all,
Even in darkness of night.
There is no real love in you.
You're just so dishonest,
A consistent liar.
A heart absent from your chest.
I wish I had the time,
To watch it all fall down.
So I'll just keep tabs,
On everyone around.
I don't want to miss it.
I'll see it come full circle.
I won't close my eyes,
And miss the pain reversal.
You'll pay for what you did.
There's nothing that can save you.
The devil called me,
You're on his list of things to do.
| On June 6th 2007 dieromantic88 Said : | |
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damn |
| On June 4th 2007 MissRebelLips Said : | |
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WOW! wow... that is amazing!!!!!!!! it kinda seems like it could be a song i dunno we'll see! |
| On May 16th 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said : | |
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I like it! Nice imagery. |
| On May 14th 2007 chrissey08h2 Said : | |
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wow good imagedry... and so honest... i like it a lot :) |
| On May 14th 2007 atothedogg Said : | |
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wow i love it.... "I don't want to miss it.
I'll see it come full circle.
I won't close my eyes,
And miss the pain reversal." one of my favorite lines out of many in this poem. U have talent.bravo.
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| On May 14th 2007 pink23fairie Said : | |
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Wow that was awesome! You're a very good writer =) |
| On May 14th 2007 chickenbroth Said : | |
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its good for you to be able to put this kind of stuff out there. Good job! |
| On May 14th 2007 bennyhanna Said : | |
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I sense that you have a third poem on the way, is that true? |
| On May 14th 2007 bennyhanna Said : | |
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This is one of my favorties. You are able to sprinkle in great moments, great visuals, great "circle/reversal". I really like it. |
| On May 14th 2007 hooahmomma Said : | |
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uh - it's what you need in a screwed up kind of way. I am glad that you have come to this realization. Those last two lines - that's crazy. |


