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mc |
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left alone |
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Emotion |
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Scarring the World is Serious Business |
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As I Look Into the Mirror... |
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I Should Have Listened |
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I'm On The Other Line |
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Respond |
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I Was On A Late Night Train |
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I Hope The Rain Never Stops |
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Two Shots Left |
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You're Not |
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Just Stop It |
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work in progress |
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Another Riddle Without A Solution |
Screaming Like A Whore
Don't think that I don't know,
All the sins you try to hide,
The secrets behind closed doors.
I know them all.
You're such a liar,
And deceitful.
Once beautiful, now horrid.
I've caught on to all your tricks,
And how you're endlessly sick.
You're so twisted,
It's delightful.
My reaction?
I turn spiteful.
You're a walking lie,
A dancing drama.
I can't believe I let you in.
I guess you're welcome,
But don't say thank you.
If I jumped off this bridge,
Would you feel sorry?
Don't worry,
I won't go that far.
I'm not out to get you.
I know you'd see that coming.
I'll watch it come around,
And kick you to the curb.
But can you blame me,
After everything you've done?
I hope it takes awhile,
And creates a massive buildup.
I hope heaven comes first,
And save the best for last.
Hell will hit you so hard,
You'll fall so hard and fast.
Everything will be taken.
Your heart is on the floor.
You'll become forsaken.
Screaming like a whore.
| On June 4th 2007 MissRebelLips Said : | |
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SONG WORTHY!!! yes wicked man! |
| On May 18th 2007 aewer Said : | |
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hmmmm. i like some parts & not others. because each line is short, it gets a little messy throughout & you wonder exactly what you're referring to but i definately like the concept, the beginning & the end. |
| On May 16th 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said : | |
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Sounds like you really dislike someone eh? I think we've all been there. Well done though! |
| On May 14th 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
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luv the ending! |
| On May 14th 2007 pink23fairie Said : | |
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awesome! |
| On May 14th 2007 bennyhanna Said : | |
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I am not sure who this is about? I'll just ignore it! Wait, oh, I get it. Great stuff though, seriously. Wish I could have read the original draft. HA. |
| On May 14th 2007 hooahmomma Said : | |
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I love it and I am glad to hear you say it |


