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Here I Am, Back Again
Well so much for your honesty,
And honestly,
You know you don't deserve me.
Take some time off,
Come back,
React,
Just can't seem to let go.
You're a liar,
And deceitful,
And so beautiful.
My heart's on the floor,
And I'm begging for more.
Reverse,
Repeat,
Please slow down.
Don't stumble,
Or fumble,
And let my heart hit the ground.
You're so undeserving,
No effort in preserving,
Everything we ever had.
Here I am,
Alone I stand,
Suffering it all.
| On May 8th 2007 thecolorblack Said : | |
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Damn. At a loss of words. |
| On May 7th 2007 hooahmomma Said : | |
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I know EXACTLY what you're saying....every word...think we have the same thing running through our heads.... |
| On May 7th 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
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luv it! |
| On May 1st 2007 bennyhanna Said : | |
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This one is where I know you are. This reflects the true depth of what is going on with your life. Well done, kid. |
| On May 1st 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said : | |
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This is good, you can tell what you were going through & feeling. |
| On April 30th 2007 pink23fairie Said : | |
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Wow...you're an amazing writer! Love it! |


