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Created on 3-25-07
So don't get carried away,
I've seen this all before.
Show me where the body is.
You've made yourself a whore.
Show me where the party is.
Bring it on back to the start.
Take it back to the beginning,
Before you ripped away my heart.
You're so deadly, you're so lovely.
You've shown me brand new ways,
To enjoy you're dying days.
Something real, something timeless.
You used the truth,
As a good excuse.
Yeah I know you heard that one before.
So now every hour on the hour,
I shove you down the endless stairs in my mind.
Please Login to post comments| On May 8th 2007 hooahmomma Said : | |
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LOVED how you ended it! Loved it! |
| On April 30th 2007 pink23fairie Said : | |
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Wow...=) |
| On March 26th 2007 lovemynavyman Said : | |
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your really good. i like this one as well |
| On March 25th 2007 Blackstreaks01 Said : | |
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I like this one.... |
| On March 25th 2007 dolphingrl103 Said : | |
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huh? that last part had me confused but i still think its pretty good. |
