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Two Shots Left
My ammunition's running low,
These words from heart&mind to pen.
Do you feel safer now you know,
That you're the one that puts this to an end?
If that's so you won't know what hit you.
With my last few shots I have to gun you down.
You'll be so busy doing what you do.
Everyone sees it coming and you don't hit the ground.
So as I lay you in bed tonight,
Feel my last two shots sink into your head.
Good night.
| On April 30th 2007 pink23fairie Said : | |
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Wow very well written |
| On April 8th 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said : | |
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Good Job! I like this. |
| On March 28th 2007 Leigh02 Said : | |
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majorly brilliant |
| On March 26th 2007 chickenbroth Said : | |
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Yeah, I agree. Well done! |
| On March 25th 2007 bennyhanna Said : | |
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This one is unreal. |


