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Created on 3-21-07
Be safe because I worry you,
At least that's what you say.
It's true and I should believe you.
I'll say that I'm okay.
Next one comes, your worry's getting worse.
You hope I'm home but I don't care,
I'm living with this curse.
I believe you, but do I dare,
Respond in kind or not?
To reply or let your message rot?
My choices lay before me.
You don't know how I feel.
How to respond I do not know.
I don't know what is real.
The reply forms inside my head.
It's simple, "Just go back to bed".
Please Login to post comments| On April 30th 2007 pink23fairie Said : | |
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Love it! |
| On April 27th 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
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i like it too |
| On March 24th 2007 thecolorblack Said : | |
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I like it of course |
| On March 21st 2007 chickenbroth Said : | |
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yeah, I like this one |
| On March 21st 2007 bennyhanna Said : | |
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I really do enjoy this one, my friend. |
