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I Should Have Listened
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Created on 3-20-07
You didn't struggle,
Just a few whispered words.
No fighting, no resisting.
Giving in to avoid,
Any more chances of confrontation.
I felt you letting go,
Felt your will subside.
Should've been more in tune,
With your every shudder.
Should've listened to your heart,
And heard its little flutter.
Please Login to post comments| On May 14th 2007 peterzshadow Said : | |
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THIS one did make me cry. |
| On April 30th 2007 pink23fairie Said : | |
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Wow..... |
| On March 28th 2007 Leigh02 Said : | |
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i dont think you have one poem that i dont like!! wow, you're amazing |
| On March 21st 2007 bennyhanna Said : | |
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I think this could apply to many people you know. |
| On March 21st 2007 lovemynavyman Said : | |
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I think at one point or another we all fell his way. great way of putting it. |
| On March 21st 2007 thecolorblack Said : | |
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...You love her. |
