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Created on 2-8-08
In the heart of all that I know,
I found that all the people are mad.
Oddly they follow some protocol,
When life pushes them against the wall.
Emotionless bastards wander my streets.
Well I guess it's not their fault.
Sufferers of Anhedonia,
The populus of my being.
Turn off the lights,
And shut the door on your way out.
Please Login to post comments| On April 22nd 2008 ArtificialRed Said : | |
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"Emotionless bastards", beautiful. Absolutely wonderful. "Anhedonia", that's a great word. Those are terms that make people think, and use dictionaries. |
| On February 8th 2008 bennyhanna Said : | |
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Great usage of anhedonia, wonder how many will need to look that up. This one is different, doesn't follow the same message as the others, I think I like it... |
