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Darkest pain
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Created on 6-15-07
shall i fall back to my darkest hours
to releive this new pain
the spacing and steamless showers
i swear i was going insane
the inevidable doom that awaited at my door
was the object of my dreams
so i try to face my fears as my blood falls on the floor
my eyes filled with tears,
and my ears of silent screams
whether i fall back into that hell
or stay in the one im in
its if im happy that i fell
and that i know ill never win
so please don't push me now...
im more fragile than i seem
im standing at the edge looking down
and wondering what new suffering tommorrow may bring
Please Login to post comments| On June 10th 2008 Babytia91 Said : | |
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This is really good....it's very deep...i like it a lot! |
| On February 28th 2008 codyhance Said : | |
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that poem is amazing i realy like it alot.... |
| On January 11th 2008 idinogurl Said : | |
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Wow I like that. Hmm it actually gave me a mental image of what you were writing about. |
| On December 22nd 2007 alex5005 Said : | |
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thats deep |
| On December 13th 2007 Daemion Said : | |
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i really dont like rhyming... but this is pretty good ^_^ |
| On October 16th 2007 htownyesi Said : | |
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this is soo deep i love it!!!
i also love 2 write about pain!
u shoukd check out sum of my peoms! |
| On July 31st 2007 thekillerheart Said : | |
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I like your deep poetry |
| On July 7th 2007 softballdemon Said : | |
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very amazing. i love it. |
| On June 29th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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hmmmmmmmm....... very interesting descriptions,,, i liked "the spacing and steamless showers",, gave me this weird image in my mind's eye,,, and altho it is somewhat pessimistic,,, it has this great depth ,,,, great job!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang |
| On June 21st 2007 tripppants Said : | |
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i love that poem katy its reaqly good |
| On June 19th 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
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amazing poem! i luv it |
