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An old one. It's about my g-ma.Rate this Poem
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Remembering is Painful [the anniversary]
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Created on 6-15-07
Today is the day
The day I remember
The day I hope to forget
The day Death shook my world off its hinges
And left me trashed and scattered
I know I must not forget you,
But remembering is so hard
Remembering you shatters me
When I know you will no be here for me no longer
Tonight I might cry
But it won’t make me stronger
Now my eyes are cracked and dry
Tears were once a friend of mine
But no, they are the enemy, they left me stupid and blind
I try to tell myself that you are always here
In my heart
Like you always told me
That was over a year ago, and I hate to say it,
But its not the same
My heart is still frozen with fear
Still bleeding from its wounds of Death’s call
I may never love again
Well it has been one heck of a year without you
Well, it was a year
But I didn’t like it
And I’ve been telling myself its time to move on
Well, I’m afraid I’m not ready to let go….
Please Login to post comments| On February 18th 2008 k15smith Said : | |
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I like coooooooooooooool |
| On January 13th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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R.I.P Granny. Very moving and emotional. She must have been quite influence in your life. My condolences on her demise. |
| On December 16th 2007 superfreashcat Said : | |
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it sounds more about a lost lover then about a grandma .... |
| On December 7th 2007 Kirstinbabe301 Said : | |
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wow thats deep! |
| On November 2nd 2007 getfuckinglow Said : | |
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Thats really good |
| On October 18th 2007 SmartAzngirl Said : | |
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this is just really deep. Sorry about that. |
| On August 14th 2007 blindfaeth Said : | |
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Sorry, no one deserves to feel this way..
I know, because I have.. |
| On August 12th 2007 LobdaBollikov Said : | |
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Hi. Can I just ask if it was an actual fatality or if you're just referring to it as a death?
Either way I get it, and I like it. It's not supposed to be liked, but I like it coz I get it, and I've been in that place for the last 10 months myself. Still no sure if it's dead, it's the longest death scene I've ever witnessed. Anyway... too much info for now. Y'all take care and keep those emotions directed onto paper as well - coz amid the rubble we can dust off some things of beauty. |
| On July 31st 2007 thekillerheart Said : | |
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"sigh" well trully its a great emotional ussage and it gets to the reader.. but one can always love again by a person that will love someone back and he will never leave ^_^ |
| On June 15th 2007 Pikkakard Said : | |
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That's very good... very emotional. |
