Email
Password

Deliverance

Views (164) Anger Created on 8-3-07 Flag

Writing a fresh rhyme

Is like starting a new kind

Of expressing things in my mind

But it's still kinda hard to keep on time

 

Everytime I think of how I feel

It reminds me of how real

This life can really be

I then I really see

 

That this life isn't too bad

But somtimes it just makes me mad

Of how ignorant some people can be

And then I realize the biggest suspect of this is me

 

I've been all to fight the power

To resist the temptation

To not shorten another's life by an hour

To bring sense to all creation

 

But this world isn't quite ready to commit

To such a huge infraction

And when we try to make them submit

We get a serious reaction

 

So it's best to wait

But not too late

It's not time to deliverate

 

Yet another spur-of-the-moment one...not as good as I was going for but wth =\

Please Login to post comments
On August 15th 2007 spasm01 Said :
spasm01 i really like it,and i think i kinda see where ya coming from. but i like when us writers write off the tip of our minds. it lets the ppl readin,idk,feel you more? eh anwyays,lovely work honey,as usual
On August 14th 2007 blindfaeth Said :
blindfaeth You dont have to understand to realize how important it is to the writer :o
On August 12th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo I like poems like this. It's organic and from the heart.
On August 3rd 2007 thecolorblack Said :
thecolorblack Might be hard to follow...xD You'd have to be me to understand