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The Means
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Created on 12-17-07
All your actions
and missed reactions
cut me to fractions
as I revel in revelations
You never leave me at ease
no room to breathe
incapable, powerless as I bleed
future bleak and unknown, unpaved
Your words brought out the worst
in me with every verse
You branded me a curse
undoubting of my loss
My life went down the drain
You condemned my insanity reign
absolved me to be untrained, untamed
unseen beside my dreams.
Please Login to post comments| On December 20th 2007 amptone Said : | |
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I agree, awesome |
| On December 20th 2007 Vestque Said : | |
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Awesome as Always :P |
| On December 19th 2007 Xpoetxgurlx Said : | |
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this is awesome!! i absolutly looooooove it!! :D |
| On December 19th 2007 Snooky9e Said : | |
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loved it... |
| On December 18th 2007 Smarties4 Said : | |
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Wow! Amazing. I love the rhyming pattern and the emotion is very strong. Awesome! |
| On December 18th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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woahhhhhhh niceeeee |
