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Created:
12/17 2007
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My Poems
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In The Fall |
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18
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SMILE |
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This Girl I Know |
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BROKEN |
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Dark Hallway |
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LET ME |
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Why I Left Him |
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Dying Thoughts |
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Gone |
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Unrequited Love Hurts |
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Last Words To You |
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My ASS is NUMB |
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For Nikki, My Nikey |
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Rock Bastard |
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Ominous |
The Means
All your actions
and missed reactions
cut me to fractions
as I revel in revelations
You never leave me at ease
no room to breathe
incapable, powerless as I bleed
future bleak and unknown, unpaved
Your words brought out the worst
in me with every verse
You branded me a curse
undoubting of my loss
My life went down the drain
You condemned my insanity reign
absolved me to be untrained, untamed
unseen beside my dreams.
| On December 20th 2007 amptone Said: |
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| I agree, awesome |
| On December 20th 2007 Vestque Said: |
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| Awesome as Always :P |
| On December 19th 2007 Xpoetxgurlx Said: |
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| this is awesome!! i absolutly looooooove it!! :D |
| On December 19th 2007 Snooky9e Said: |
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| loved it... |
| On December 18th 2007 Smarties4 Said: |
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| Wow! Amazing. I love the rhyming pattern and the emotion is very strong. Awesome! |
| On December 18th 2007 California1516 Said: |
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| woahhhhhhh niceeeee |


