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Ghost of Us
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Created on 9-7-07
i'm perched at the front
but then tossed to the side
trampled to an inch within
torn of happiness, and worn,
the ghost of us passes me by
but then tossed to the side
trampled to an inch within
torn of happiness, and worn,
the ghost of us passes me by
Please Login to post comments| On September 7th 2007 Javellef Said : | |
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Short and sweet, but a wonderful write. Nice work! |
| On September 7th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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mmmmmmhhh... not so sure of the ending,, but the beginning sounded waaaay good... idk,,, maybe the wordings of words,,, it just doesn't seem to flow,,,, but,, yeah,, English classes are quite somber and boringness.... nice work!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang |
| On September 7th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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This is quite simple, I see that it has lots of potential, it is a great start! |
