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When I Want to Kill You
Underlying vessel take a moment to recall when the army burried you, you were so very small
Fed tomatoes quickening a lever in your eye, Winced and readied for attack, The regal queen must die
I let you harbour secretly and take all of my time, just to watch you strengthening, I got off in my mind
You became despondent and began to liquify, Saying please I think I'm ready, this will be all mine
Empower me and make me free to show my glory rage, I will spare their dignity and vex this awful place
Release me from the ever glowing tranquility I hate, Aftermath is yours to wrath, There won't be much to say
So contemplating history and my own selfish thoughts, I came upon an answer that was deserved to be wrought
Go into seven houses and come out with "souveniers", Go into seven churches and call followers to here, Go into seven brothels, find some women with a curse, Go into seven junkyards and then dig up dirty earth, Then bring it back to my feet and then do it in reverse
When all is done you will be free to slay and harass fate, I will stay in Bethlehem and rendevous with snakes
So the vessel left and did the things I said to do, Little did he know that once he started he was through
Seven homes and Seven chruches, seven brothels in, he came to his first junkyard and was hollowed from within
No condtions to forewarn his inevitable shift, But I was well aware of the junkyards secret gift
In the springtime, when it was, the glow worms are all there, Grazing on the waste and hypnotizing the dead air
Just one whiff and evil moves from inside to the sky, Making you a demon who became a normal guy
| On October 14th 2007 numbbbb0z Said : | |
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Woah, I love the 3rd to last line. I love it all, really. In spokenword the meaning is even more astounding. This is exactly the type I've been waiting to read, and considering what you said it's about..The meaning is even more..Something great. I feel the image stirring in my thoughts, oh olde ye times blaming our future. Paint a portrait across my mind. Wonderful poem! :D |
| On October 14th 2007 numbbbb0z Said : | |
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This is personally the best poem I've read all day =]] |
| On October 14th 2007 tervboy Said : | |
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I try |
| On October 14th 2007 pru1989 Said : | |
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thats kinda kreepy |
| On October 14th 2007 tervboy Said : | |
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thanks, I appreciate your thoughts. |
| On October 14th 2007 alexia66 Said : | |
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not bad |


