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It seems I’m getting lost in your tomorrows, as the steady day grows dim.
I’ve left behind all my sorrows. I’ve left behind all that is him.
My head spins in anticipation, but my heart is lost in what to dos.
Nothing can top this sensation, though the light is flayed in nasty hues.
Ripped from life, this great endeavor. Speed and strength won’t get me through.
Who am I to say forever? Just pretend. Don’t think, just do.
Knowing far well, but it’s too complex. I’m at the front of the line.
I can’t predict what’ll happen next and I pass up every sign.
A sinuous bind in my perception. A calculated lie within the dream.
Friendship marked in complete deception. Unrequited love lost in the gleam.
| On June 24th 2008 lillex64 Said : | |
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amazing! |
| On June 11th 2008 jaylynn142434 Said : | |
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wowza. thats fantastic. great job. |
| On June 8th 2008 Jumpy1811 Said : | |
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wow, i love it! |
| On June 7th 2008 coltaw Said : | |
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love it. Good story, rhyming and meter. awesome |
| On June 5th 2008 williamscott7 Said : | |
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This is one of those poems that I love so much, and yet fail to get the true meaning. I guess I'm just dumb sometimes. Overall, it's excellent. |
| On June 5th 2008 gusty13 Said : | |
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good poem |
| On June 5th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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I loved when it rymed a lil lost when it didn't. A real nice poem though! :) |
| On June 5th 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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Great rhyming. I love this one! |
| On June 4th 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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I love the title. It's very dramatic. I love it! |
| On June 4th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I realy love the wording. It's good. I love the style lots :) |
| On June 4th 2008 twilight8218 Said : | |
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love it! the rhyming and practically everything else! |


