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Kinda corny.Rate this Poem
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Just Need Me
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Created on 3-3-08
Just need me
That’s all I ask
If you didn’t I couldn’t go on
Just need me
Take off your mask
Don’t wait till the love is gone
Just need me
Show me you care
Because if you don’t I’ll just give up
Just need me
I want to be there
Is my love not enough?
Just need me
I love you
I’ll hold you until time is done
Just need me
I’ll free you
I think that you’re the one
You don’t need me?
Oh…
Then I’ve done all I could do
You don’t want me?
Oh…
Well, I really needed you…
Please Login to post comments| On March 12th 2008 coltaw Said : | |
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Nice twist at the end, it really brings it all together. Nice finish |
| On March 4th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Aww~ I like iit. It's not corny either:) |
| On March 3rd 2008 krandt00 Said : | |
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this is good but i didnt read it all i was bored |
| On March 3rd 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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I like it :) nice work |
| On March 3rd 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Really touching. |
| On March 3rd 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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cute... I love it! :P |
| On March 3rd 2008 LadyCha0s Said : | |
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awwww love it. thats me right now. lol |
| On March 3rd 2008 jwoody1980 Said : | |
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wording a little awkward but its good |
| On March 3rd 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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I like the Take Off your Mask line. So true. |
| On March 3rd 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Oooo ouch! but this is good!! love it |
| On March 3rd 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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I like this... it's different, but it works |
