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Created on 3-2-08
So undecided
Can't seem to care
Hate to be one-sided
Even though I'm always there
Empty your eyes, friend
Because there won't be a time
You have to live through it
I always rhyme
So pissed at her words
She acts like she knows all
What makes her think she gets me
She won't catch me when I fall.
Ignorance
She says that's me
But if that's true
Then why do I work for free?
I dont work, she says
Well, living here is enough
I love her, that annoys me
But all this shit is tough
Please Login to post comments| On March 4th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Mom's can drive you mad! I like this one~ |
| On March 4th 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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This reminds me of my mom before she had her stroke and car accident. I was always mad at her and called her names and it was only when I had to take care of her I realized how much she meant to me. |
| On March 4th 2008 beautyisthewol Said : | |
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I know what you are feeling, maybe not how you are feeling, but there is a difference. I am in the same situation but it's not my mom that's hard on me, it's my dad. He is hard on my mom and brother too. It's not as bad as it used to be, though. I have to agree with the one that says she could be doing worse harm to you, it is true that she could be beating you and negelecting you and a bunch of other horrible things to you. However, unless you prepare yourself now you won't be able to get out of the hell hole as soon as you are able to. You probable don't understand what I mean, and if you want to know just ask me.
You wrote this very well. I like the way you write. |
| On March 3rd 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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I love it My parents were tough on me and i hated them sometime but I never saw the good in it until i had children of my own :) great job |
| On March 3rd 2008 Jumpy1811 Said : | |
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it's good, get those feelings out however you can, otherwise they don't hurt anybody but you. |
| On March 3rd 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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Living with the folks can get tough. |
| On March 3rd 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Sooo strong! Sooo Good! I love it!!!! |
| On March 2nd 2008 KellzerBellzer Said : | |
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i like! it's kinda like my poem Hey Dad. nice job |
| On March 2nd 2008 LadyCha0s Said : | |
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love it. |
| On March 2nd 2008 adammckiel2000 Said : | |
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i get this one....i like it a lot |
| On March 2nd 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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here I can relate. well written! |
| On March 2nd 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Parents can drive you crazy...Awesome emotion in this. I can definitely relate. |
| On March 2nd 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said : | |
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yup having a mom must be tough someone who puts a roof over your head must be really hard its a good poem great emotion good structure but unless she is causing physical harm to you girl she could be doing a lot worse good poem though |
| On March 2nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Living at home is a chore in itself sometimes. haha Nice write! |
| On March 2nd 2008 imagitu95 Said : | |
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i like |
