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The Lights On The Water

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Lights on the water.

Blurred and bright.

I sit on the front porch.

Admiring the night.

I feel my head spinning.

I look back through the years.

Embracing the laughter.

Understanding the tears.

I miss the one,

who has my heart.

Too long the time,

that we have been apart.

I look at the water.

Seeing my existence.

It’s there in the light.

Offering assistance.

I dip my toes in.

Testing the tide.

Feeling the warmth.

Keeping my pride.

I wade through the water.

I feel the weight lifting.

I slip under the surface.

Barely shifting.

The water is dark.

Almost mesmerizing.

I feel all around me.

It’s hypnotizing.

The water takes me.

But I am not afraid.

I move on to the next life.

Memories fade.

But the lights.

The lights on the water.

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On June 9th 2008 123Vikki Said :
123Vikki I like this poem. The imagery is great :] I particularly like the mystery in the poem it makes it more interesting and engaging.
On March 4th 2008 maximusglassiu Said :
maximusglassiu Very nice poem, I have not read one with such substance in a very long time.
On March 1st 2008 locachoclate Said :
locachoclate thats beatifull
On February 29th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord You had in the water there with you!! it was amazingly written!
On February 28th 2008 sliversideup Said :
sliversideup this is absorlutly amazing
On February 28th 2008 twilight8218 Said :
twilight8218 very good
On February 28th 2008 Nashville101 Said :
Nashville101 cool... very nice poem
On February 28th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Very unique. Awesome work!
On February 28th 2008 jwoody1980 Said :
my picture
i like it very good
On February 28th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 Great job I love it :)
On February 28th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 This ones really amazing! Nice work!
On February 28th 2008 Jumpy1811 Said :
Jumpy1811 wow, i love this one, great job!!
On February 28th 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane This was truly a great write. It had great flow, imagery and meaning! Wonderful job!!
On February 28th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard A great write. I loved reading this one.
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On February 28th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll This is amazing~ I really like it. *SNAPS* `
On February 28th 2008 adammckiel2000 Said :
adammckiel2000 wow i love it...keep writing....this is by far one of the best things ive read all day (and i read a lot today)