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The Lights On The Water
Lights on the water.
Blurred and bright.
I sit on the front porch.
Admiring the night.
I feel my head spinning.
I look back through the years.
Embracing the laughter.
Understanding the tears.
I miss the one,
who has my heart.
Too long the time,
that we have been apart.
I look at the water.
Seeing my existence.
It’s there in the light.
Offering assistance.
I dip my toes in.
Testing the tide.
Feeling the warmth.
Keeping my pride.
I wade through the water.
I feel the weight lifting.
I slip under the surface.
Barely shifting.
The water is dark.
Almost mesmerizing.
I feel all around me.
It’s hypnotizing.
The water takes me.
But I am not afraid.
I move on to the next life.
Memories fade.
But the lights.
The lights on the water.
| On June 9th 2008 123Vikki Said : | |
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I like this poem. The imagery is great :] I particularly like the mystery in the poem it makes it more interesting and engaging. |
| On March 4th 2008 maximusglassiu Said : | |
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Very nice poem, I have not read one with such substance in a very long time. |
| On March 1st 2008 locachoclate Said : | |
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thats beatifull |
| On February 29th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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You had in the water there with you!! it was amazingly written! |
| On February 28th 2008 sliversideup Said : | |
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this is absorlutly amazing |
| On February 28th 2008 twilight8218 Said : | |
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very good |
| On February 28th 2008 Nashville101 Said : | |
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cool... very nice poem |
| On February 28th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Very unique. Awesome work! |
| On February 28th 2008 jwoody1980 Said : | |
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i like it very good |
| On February 28th 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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Great job I love it :) |
| On February 28th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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This ones really amazing! Nice work! |
| On February 28th 2008 Jumpy1811 Said : | |
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wow, i love this one, great job!! |
| On February 28th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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This was truly a great write. It had great flow, imagery and meaning! Wonderful job!! |
| On February 28th 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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A great write. I loved reading this one. |
| On February 28th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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This is amazing~ I really like it. *SNAPS*
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| On February 28th 2008 adammckiel2000 Said : | |
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wow i love it...keep writing....this is by far one of the best things ive read all day (and i read a lot today) |


