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About my ex and best friend, Jake.Rate this Poem
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Losing The One Who Mattered Most
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Created on 1-24-08
Deeply hidden feelings behind his hazel eyes.
It's his words that kill me, they cause my demise.
Stuck inside the center watching him love her so.
I want to leave so badly, but I can't just let him go.
He was there when everyone wasn't.
When I was too blind to understand that he would have done anything
If it meant I would hold his hand.
But I fucked it up. I lost it. I didn't know what to do.
So now I sit here waiting and hoping that I'll get my someone too.
Please Login to post comments| On February 28th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I love this one~ wow! |
| On February 13th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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love the sencerity. you get your point across clearly. |
| On February 9th 2008 coltaw Said : | |
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sorry for your loss. you can feel the sincerity in this poem. |
| On January 26th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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I love it! |
