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Greatly Lived Past

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Trust all your decisions
Never let them go
Try to be optimistic
And don't judge things you don't know

Feel the wind it's blowing
The cold is unknown
The sun isn't shining
You must go on, on your own

Your life will be your refuge
The future you cannot see
Will show the light inside you
Whatever that light may be

The sounds of everlasting
Never leave your ears
The people you are out casting
Are deep within your fears

The skies that fly above you
And the ground beneath your feet
Will have something for you
That you think you can't defeat

So leave all your troubles
Others have many more
There are so many things in life
That we surely can't ignore

Differences might be a problem
Secrets you can't keep
Friendships might be crushed
Cuts and scrapes that are just too deep

The shield that hides your insides
Might finally be discovered
But some little parts of you
May never be recovered

The anger that's inside you
Will soon disappear
A message that your heart sends
Will be shown clean and clear

Your conscience will keep you sane
And your heart will keep on hoping
Many will see the changes
Don't keep on moping

The memories that are deep inside you
And the many dreams that keep you waiting
Will hold a special place inside
That will never end up fading

So keep on believing
Live everyday like your last
Because when you think of life in future
You'll think of your greatly lived past

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On January 21st 2008 Wyldemiller Said :
Wyldemiller I like the standard you use here and the word choice. It pulls you into the story as you flow along. Appreciate you sharing this :)
On January 21st 2008 house89 Said :
house89 Yay for greatly lived past!! you know its my fave all my love