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Deadly
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Created on 1-20-08
Falling into a chamber full of feelings I've never known
Nights of cold Remember leave me all alone
That's when I begin to think of things better forgotten...
Skin soft and warm to the touch
Lips full and giving, fill me with heat
Deadly
Completely Deadly
Hazel eyes see me the way no one else has before
Hands touch where I've never been touched before
Poisonous
Completely Poisonous
Arms embrace me tightly giving me an anchor to this world
But I steadily lose control of everything around me
Intoxicating
Completely Intoxicating
Then it's over, we're over.
You leave me for something else, someone better.
You left me defenseless
All I wanted was you
Deadly
You are completely Deadly.
Please Login to post comments| On March 1st 2008 RalRasper Said : | |
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very good...completely very good |
| On February 26th 2008 adammckiel2000 Said : | |
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awsome i love it |
| On February 9th 2008 coltaw Said : | |
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This is pretty great. The love and loss of the narrator is clear and vibrant. |
| On January 26th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Great choice of words. I love this! |
