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I wrote the draft at 3am in the dark...Rate this Poem
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Created:
06/15 2009
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79
Category:
Love
My Poems
A love poem
A single rose petal from a single rose
a poem written in red
Around you I try to act composed and not to say things that could be easily said
You say you have many masks but you only show me one
You say you are able to say things that could easily make my feelings hurt
But i dont care as you caress me before the twilight sun
Yes i'm a fool and I dont truly understand my feelings
But to run away, to even turn away is something i would find unforgivable
So keep me by your side and i'll be forever faithful
(To my handsome prince of darkness, Andrew xxxx)
| On June 16th 2009 supertaurusgal Said: |
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| woah thanks guys seriously... okay i'm overwhelmed.... its really that good? |
| On June 15th 2009 lisaljb Said: |
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| This is cute! :) |
| On June 15th 2009 mellymellyyay Said: |
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| I agree w Fictitious, nice first three lines. Those lines kept me interested. |
| On June 15th 2009 XXFictitiousXX Said: |
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| u kpet it genuin and actually used understandable shit... actually understood...there's such a thing as too poetic at times and ur balance was FINE AND THREADLIKE |
| On June 15th 2009 XXFictitiousXX Said: |
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| its cool format...cant really critique anythin else...it satisfied originality and thats mega point scorage |
| On June 15th 2009 XXFictitiousXX Said: |
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| the thinGGs we function on lackin sleep :P KILLER FIRST THREE LINES... JAGGED AND FRESH |
| On June 15th 2009 supertaurusgal Said: |
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| I wrote this just after a dream so really its about my love and my dream |


