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Death is Coming |
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Warmth |
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My Wrath |
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Justice |
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Different |
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Fate |
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Nervousness |
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Crimson Agony |
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Anger |
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Life Hath Come |
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Rath Roiben Rye |
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Gone |
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Just Another Day |
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An Warm Hand Against an Icy One |
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The Highway of Life, a song |
A Winding Path
A winding road of love
never did look so straight
as I gazed down its daunting path
right into your loving face
Along it, roses grew so beautifully
just like that amazing one
that you handed over to me
Every time I think of you
my mind drifts into haze
covered with your illuminating scent
that makes me say I love you
It seems nothing can tear us apart
that the world around us
is just away so far
You are the one of my dreams
the one that makes my stomach flutter
the one who I care about
only you and no other
As you hold me close
against your protecting frame
I glance around me
to see my life has changed
Because you are the one
the only one I love
the one who can take care of me
Until both our lives are done
I want to hold you forever
to never let go
to hold you with me
I have never loved someone so
Never to part
we will be together
for as long as our hearts
are entwined forever.
| On June 19th 2008 C4444 Said : | |
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Nice poem very creative!!!!!! |
| On June 4th 2008 chokosei Said : | |
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wow your so talented.. i love the words you used.. nice |
| On June 4th 2008 angelofpurity5 Said : | |
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oh wow i wish things could come to me in a flash great job |
| On June 4th 2008 moosegurl01 Said : | |
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Nice poem...I like how it showed a lot of detail. |
| On June 4th 2008 McRrOxMySoX8 Said : | |
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This is an amazing poem! I love the scene about the path with the beautiful flowers. It felt as if though I was walking through it. I love it! |
| On June 4th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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Oh this is great.loved it.......... |
| On June 4th 2008 sunnyattheneo Said : | |
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This came to me in a flash. I started just singing words and I knew I had to write it down so that I wouldn't forget. |


