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A Winding Path

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A winding road of love

never did look so straight

as I gazed down its daunting path

right into your loving face

Along it, roses grew so beautifully

just like that amazing one

that you handed over to me

Every time I think of you

my mind drifts into haze

covered with your illuminating scent

that makes me say I love you

It seems nothing can tear us apart

that the world around us

is just away so far

You are the one of my dreams

the one that makes my stomach flutter

the one who I care about

only you and no other

As you hold me close

against your protecting frame

I glance around me

to see my life has changed

Because you are the one

the only one I love

the one who can take care of me

Until both our lives are done

I want to hold you forever

to never let go

to hold you with me

I have never loved someone so

Never to part

we will be together

for as long as our hearts

are entwined forever.

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On June 19th 2008 C4444 Said :
C4444 Nice poem very creative!!!!!!
On June 4th 2008 chokosei Said :
chokosei wow your so talented.. i love the words you used.. nice
On June 4th 2008 angelofpurity5 Said :
angelofpurity5 oh wow i wish things could come to me in a flash great job
On June 4th 2008 moosegurl01 Said :
moosegurl01 Nice poem...I like how it showed a lot of detail.
On June 4th 2008 McRrOxMySoX8 Said :
McRrOxMySoX8 This is an amazing poem! I love the scene about the path with the beautiful flowers. It felt as if though I was walking through it. I love it!
On June 4th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia Oh this is great.loved it..........
On June 4th 2008 sunnyattheneo Said :
sunnyattheneo This came to me in a flash. I started just singing words and I knew I had to write it down so that I wouldn't forget.