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The 2nd poem I wrote, in middle school!!Rate this Poem
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Created:
02/04 2007
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167
Category:
Love
My Poems
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27
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You |
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17
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Ambers Poem |
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15
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Stuck |
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17
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Unicorn |
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15
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Why? |
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11
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Can I be? |
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16
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Untitled |
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22
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Prettiness |
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18
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My Mistake |
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15
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Drown me in your love |
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18
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One |
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20
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Mysterious |
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26
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Life |
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14
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Brad's valentines day poems (True Love) |
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6
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Do you love me? |
One
Sweet as the sun,
brighter than its rays,
he's my lovely one,
that I believe in through the days.
Sparkles like a diamond,
shinier than gold,
he's my precious one,
that in my dreams I hold.
Brighter than the heavens,
worth more than anything to me,
he's me only loved one,
I wish would fall for me.
I'd give my life up for him,
reach out and touch the sun.
I'd do anything for him,
for he's my lovely one.
Please Login to post comments| On June 4th 2007 fgggfx Said: |
| cute |
| On May 8th 2007 ssjscotty Said: |
| not bad |
| On May 1st 2007 pink23fairie Said: |
| pretty good for a middle-schooler =) |
| On May 1st 2007 spasm01 Said: |
| i like it and for middle school that is some strong emotions |
| On May 1st 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said: |
| AWW!! I like this.... |
| On February 10th 2007 BrokenSoul1999 Said: |
| thats cute |
| On February 9th 2007 tarahmay Said: |
| wow this is great i can relate to feeling this way about sumone good job xoxo |
| On February 4th 2007 numba1chic Said: |
| i liked it alot... that was really good. epecially for a middle schooler :-P |
