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Just a poem i quickly wrote today...Rate this Poem
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Lone Soldier
His Breath is quick & shallow,
His eyes are filled with fear,
His palms are hot & sweaty,
He knows that he is near,
He is walking through the forest,
Stepping lightly on the ground,
Warily looking each way,
Then he hears a sound,
The bullet flies through the air,
He tightens his grip on the gun,
The bullet barely missed him,
So he breaks into a run,
He knows not from where it came,
So he shoots into the trees,
Now only the sound of his footsteps,
But he dares not to freeze,
Heart pumping wildly,
He knows not which way to go,
Another gunshot is fired,
His pace begins to slow…..
….. He falls to his knees,
His blood covering the snow.
| On June 27th 2007 undiie Said : | |
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Nice. I liked it. |
| On June 27th 2007 thatonegirl84 Said : | |
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Love it! |
| On May 27th 2007 JadeMw Said : | |
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I like this poem it can be applied to veitnam i really enjoyed this poem.... |
| On February 9th 2007 jesusfreak808 Said : | |
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I love this poem of course I gave it a thumbs up. :) |
| On February 4th 2007 stubishead Said : | |
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hey, this is one of my first poems...
hope its ok... =D |


