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Have You Lost Your Mind |
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Have You Lost Your Mind
a finger running down a blade
"have you lost your mind"
confusion
a flash
blindingly bright
"have you lost your mind"
words echo deeply
with no meaning
mixed with the concert of screems
"have you lost your mind"
fading light
exhaustion
confusion
blood stains on the carpet
"have you lost your mind"
a blade running down a finger
concentrate
behold
behave
wander around pointlessly
"have you lost your mind"
free-fall
distant shards of reality
carpet stains on the blood
relax
flowing in and out
"have you lost your mind"
dancers take the scene
eyes move from chaos
dance
"have you lost your mind"
relax
fade
be
"have you lost your mind"
just blood
light
a woman dressed in white
leaning close
"have you lost your mind"
darkness
| On July 27th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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wow-this one is a great write. I love the short lines. You did a great job with line breaks! |


