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vengence eventually comes

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Views (1632) Anger Created on 7-18-07 Flag

i can feel the glow of the light from with in my grave,

i feel no pain of contradiction but i notice decay.

and if the darkness of fear will defeat my gain,

you may as well kill me while my hopes still remain.

underneath my veil of compassion hides a suffering soul,

and in my heart a burning anger slowly taking its toll.

i feel the chill of death as it suffocates the light,

through the pieces of panic from losing my life.

below the surface of your anger lies a festering fear,

fed by the resonating hate from every word that you hear.

you bled me dry till i had nothing left,

but now you're stuck in my nightmare.....of your perpetual death

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On March 1st 2008 intoxicatedinc Said :
intoxicatedinc WOW WOW WOW! teach me how to write? lol read some of my shyte churr?
On January 13th 2008 sammyoks Said :
sammyoks Woah! i feel like dat rite now..can i post this on myspace? [bulliten]
On December 23rd 2007 playfulfuzz Said :
playfulfuzz nicely written... i like the way you flow your words. You have a real nack at it. I like how you show the emotions in your work... you seem to keep them strong but you make sure you dont over power the poem... i love it^^
On December 21st 2007 Smarties4 Said :
Smarties4 Amazingly awesome as always.
On November 4th 2007 kellyjob Said :
kellyjob Wow! Love it! Very deep and dark. You must have been in alot of pain to right this!
On October 31st 2007 dsouthernlily Said :
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very good!!! You are very talented
On September 7th 2007 karenpallotta Said :
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this says alot about how I feel sometimes.
On September 2nd 2007 slipknotbabe Said :
slipknotbabe This is amazing i love it
On August 29th 2007 jennaferz Said :
jennaferz its amazing..the word choice is great
On August 29th 2007 X4packchickX Said :
X4packchickX *thumbs up* Again, richeous! I love the way you think and put it down into to words.I'd right more, but i got some stories to write to get ppl off my back XD Dueces!
On August 24th 2007 jonlovesashley Said :
jonlovesashley luv it ^_^
On August 23rd 2007 lalaloca2 Said :
lalaloca2 im speechless =]
On August 21st 2007 LordButtmonkey Said :
LordButtmonkey that was good ...very good
On August 21st 2007 Vestque Said :
Vestque Awesomeness. I think I've voted for this earlier though. Still great ^_^
On August 21st 2007 FloydTheTurtle Said :
FloydTheTurtle very good :)
On August 19th 2007 Interested1992 Said :
Interested1992 wow umm you told me to read it and wasnt bad but a writers point of view it needs work (complete honesty)
On August 19th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 woahhhhhh that was amazinggggg...love the word choices..and it was really deep..and thought provoking :D
On August 19th 2007 Blueismybaby Said :
Blueismybaby I like this one too! You're very talented at this! More so than me anyway! =)
On August 18th 2007 nlis2kool Said :
nlis2kool NICE VERY NICE
On August 18th 2007 DarkSide1477 Said :
DarkSide1477 oh i live the depth and word choice on this one
On August 18th 2007 sweetkelli16 Said :
sweetkelli16 wow good poem
On August 16th 2007 earindle Said :
earindle Awsome, like the others. :)
On August 10th 2007 blah2blah Said :
blah2blah This is one is also really really great!!! I really like the rhymning, I also rhymn in a lot of my writing.
On August 9th 2007 Tigga16 Said :
Tigga16 Love the details..you're extremely talented!
On August 9th 2007 hicktownohio Said :
hicktownohio This one is very good also.