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im tired of a false sense of direction

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Views (1090) Worry Created on 7-8-07 Flag

the pain is fading out and im left here all alone,

i dont know where to go from here,i cant do this on my own.

with every word of venom they spew out,i feel the stabs to my soul,

with every wound inflicted,infection leaving me so cold.

i feel like im crawling around blind,haunted by all i thought i left behind.

its getting hard to breathe,its like im suffocating here,

but im void of all emotion,i dont remember how it is to feel.

the walls begin to close in,and a stifling fear descends.

im not sure of who i am inside,or if there is anyone in there i recognize.

i cant even feel if my heart is beating,

and the shadow im plagued by is never fleeting.

i need an escape,something to ease my mind,

someway to break the chains that constrict and confine.

i dont really know where to go but i do know i should leave,

because this could be my last chance to breathe...

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On April 28th 2008 stormdust Said :
stormdust beautiful poem.
On February 27th 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said :
AngelOfNight47 Wow you are an absolutely amazing poem. I know that feeling like the back of my hand. It's terrible, but truth. I like it.
On January 23rd 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth You are soooooooo talented. This is wonderful!!!
On January 20th 2008 fawzia11 Said :
fawzia11 This is amazing.
On January 14th 2008 hirschey11 Said :
hirschey11 wow thats an amazing poem!!! your really good!!!
On December 21st 2007 Smarties4 Said :
Smarties4 I actually like this one better than "shattered", don't know why though. oh well, Awesome! :P
On December 15th 2007 staywithme2nit Said :
staywithme2nit awsome your a great poet
On August 23rd 2007 lalaloca2 Said :
lalaloca2 Coolness!
On August 18th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo Really good. Very descriptive. It really draws the reader in. Nice job!
On August 16th 2007 earindle Said :
earindle You're a great writer ! I just love what you write ! Keep me posted !
On August 16th 2007 JEREMYPV28 Said :
JEREMYPV28 BRAVO!! BRAVO!!!
On August 10th 2007 tece26 Said :
tece26 Very well done!
On August 10th 2007 blah2blah Said :
blah2blah I cant say i know how you felt when you wrote this bcuz its not possible, but when reading this is i felt like i could relate. another fantastic poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love it.
On August 9th 2007 CassieZ Said :
CassieZ this was very good :).
On August 9th 2007 kiss2378 Said :
kiss2378 Nice Job!
On August 9th 2007 chrissey08h2 Said :
chrissey08h2 awesome poem!
On August 9th 2007 Tigga16 Said :
Tigga16 This is how I feel
On August 9th 2007 margoholt Said :
margoholt out of those 2 u gave me to read, i def like this one better. . .i just feel like this one touched me and so im saying good job =]
On August 9th 2007 krazytiger81 Said :
krazytiger81 nice to see a fellow drummer into writing, it's good. maybe you should comment on some of mine, though doubtfully as good as yours.
On August 9th 2007 inlovewithc17 Said :
inlovewithc17 wow you are an amazing poet your really really good!!!
On August 9th 2007 joabizz Said :
joabizz you write beautifully!!!!
On August 9th 2007 HRHHermione Said :
HRHHermione nice ^_^
On August 9th 2007 brokenwing3 Said :
brokenwing3 very good, descriptive poem!
On August 9th 2007 corinne004 Said :
corinne004 Really like this. Very vivid and imaginative.
On August 9th 2007 coltaw Said :
coltaw You are an incredible writer. Dont ever stop. Please Come buy and comment on my poems as well, I would love to hear what you think. Thanks