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the reason
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Created on 6-24-07
my words simply fade to nothing.
this hole which i have dug for myself grows deeper.
now the words are resonating yet falling unanswered as the wind blows them away.
finally the silence i longed for ,but now i wish it gone.
the solitude i once ached for is replaced with a yearning for you.
im breathing but im dead inside.
i stare at you with these eyes, these vacant glass eyes and i just stare for the longest time wondering what you see.
i remember your words for they have not been blown away,and it is in your eyes that i see a reason to live.
Please Login to post comments| On December 21st 2007 Smarties4 Said : | |
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Awesome! :P |
| On October 27th 2007 crazygirl2313 Said : | |
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wow thats really good |
| On September 27th 2007 LJS2004 Said : | |
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INteresting thats a good one too! |
| On August 18th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Very expressive. Good job. |
| On August 14th 2007 nickandfallon Said : | |
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Wonderful! Sounds like it could be a really good song. Great job! |
| On August 10th 2007 blah2blah Said : | |
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you expressed how you felt about someone in very little words...that is very uncommon and hard to do for most. amazing job, it was very moving. |
| On July 17th 2007 demonica666 Said : | |
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awwww |
| On July 14th 2007 babycrzzy Said : | |
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i'm moved this one is really nice u need more ratings |
| On July 9th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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meh,,,,,,,,,,, this one reminds me of someone,,, gaarrrgh,,,,,,, i get what u mean,,, it's a nice poem,, tho i do not completely agree with it,,, but,, that's something else on and on,,,,,,,,, nvm,,,,,,,, good job~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang |
| On July 5th 2007 alexia66 Said : | |
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sweet adn awww, i feel moved by this, :D nice poem |
