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i'm tired of the fake smiles

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Views (233) Other Created on 6-24-07 Flag

why do people hold to their wants so dearly? they cling to their

superiority complexes as their world crumbles around them. they claim

sight but grope around blindly. their condenscending tones have

become replaced with ones of fear. fear that they can't control. they

 have recieved the light but they would rather falter in the darkness.

these people give everything just to be right, but in the end they

realize it's about so much more...

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On January 22nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth What a point to ponder! Such insight. Dead on, between the eyes, in your face, take that world! I love it!!!!
On December 29th 2007 xluckxnumberx7 Said :
xluckxnumberx7 i like it alot =]
On December 21st 2007 Smarties4 Said :
Smarties4 Awesome! (ok, have decided that that one word will be my comment to every poem of yours, therefore I do no have to keep writing really long comments that don't really say anything at all - like this one)
On August 10th 2007 blah2blah Said :
blah2blah i like the structure of the poem, very unique. I agree with this also, its very true and many dont realize it.
On August 9th 2007 jwoody1980 Said :
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On August 9th 2007 C00k1i3 Said :
C00k1i3 I like it, it really makes me think about what all there is out there... Great Job!
On August 9th 2007 come98 Said :
come98 great poem!!! so true well written
On July 26th 2007 alexia66 Said :
alexia66 wow, that is true and i agree with realpaintheory, it is about human nature that when we get waht we want we realise to gain it propely it takes much more. gratz another gud one
On July 17th 2007 realpaintheory Said :
realpaintheory I don't see why this poem has barely any votes/comments - I think it is probably one of your best! It just describes human nature so well...which could be why people don't want to comment. They know you're right and they don't like it lol x
On July 14th 2007 babycrzzy Said :
babycrzzy great poem and it so true
On July 11th 2007 fgggfx Said :
fgggfx great poem, very strong and powerful
On June 24th 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I really like this-I don't know if some people will ever realize just how much more there is!