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falling up

Views (299) Pain Created on 6-24-07 Flag
i claim sight yet i refuse to see so i crawl through the dark with the light in my pocket. my eyes are sewn shut so i stumble through life with my heart encavessed by shadow,all the while i quench the fire in my soul. i fear the darkness instead of embracing the light. take this nothingness from me.i've sat in the dark idlely for too long.im not the same person i was before i met you. you helped me find the stranger inside of me. im sick of staring into dead eys,eyes that look but dont see. i want something no one can take from me,a light that wont burn out.im tired of sight without any sense of feeling.help me open up my useless eyes...
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On January 25th 2008 bananashits Said :
bananashits its great.....im not that good,but i could use some more time to revise my poems.........its was nice, makes me want a taco..........
On January 21st 2008 BloodEmo Said :
BloodEmo ^_^ awesome
On December 25th 2007 MountainPearl Said :
MountainPearl wow!!!! its beautiful
On December 21st 2007 Smarties4 Said :
Smarties4 As below...
On November 25th 2007 EmoKid928 Said :
EmoKid928 really good
On September 27th 2007 LJS2004 Said :
LJS2004 I like it!!!
On September 13th 2007 Krys59973 Said :
Krys59973 soul searching.., i think
On July 27th 2007 daisylady719 Said :
daisylady719 You really are quite talented....I love reading your work!
On July 26th 2007 alexia66 Said :
alexia66 nice. shows ur hunger for something
On July 23rd 2007 VeryEvilBitch Said :
VeryEvilBitch Very good i like it
On July 17th 2007 demonica666 Said :
demonica666 I feel this poem wow
On July 14th 2007 babycrzzy Said :
babycrzzy great job
On July 11th 2007 fgggfx Said :
fgggfx i like it, it's very deep and dark with alot of emotion
On July 10th 2007 meltice01 Said :
meltice01 wow its very deep i like it alot !! ;)
On July 9th 2007 PoeticPang Said :
PoeticPang nice structure,,, makes it obscured,, but somehow,, i get it,,, i understand to a point and limit,,,, i honestly liked how u began it,,,,,,, and ended it,, and of course ur few bits of repititioned lines,, very good,,,,, indeed,, useless eyes are better off blind?........ u can still see without eyes,,, use ur mind's eye... *poke*~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang
On June 30th 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I like this one-it is so desperate~