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drowning in emotion

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Screaming for release

Screaming for release

Views (960) Pain Created on 1-22-08 Flag

There is a shadow upon me, as if my eyes are tightly closed.My heart grows weak as it acquiesces to the cold.

In this world of dreams, I haven't felt in so long, and my lungs are beginning to burn as if I'm drowning in the ocean.

I am lost in a sea of all that I've become, but the frigid waters of conformity have left me lifeless and numb.

Gasping for breath, I scream for release.

I seek for the shore which has so far eluded me.

These waters have stripped me, leaving me shivering in pain.They have taken all I am . . .

My face,

My name...

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On July 20th 2008 CiriliaRocks Said :
CiriliaRocks Wow This Poem Is Amazing... It Really Describes How I Feel.
On July 6th 2008 toysforme123 Said :
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This is a verry good poem... sorry it took so long to comment it. I will be putting some new poems on here hopefully so please comment when you can... thank you
On June 17th 2008 cass2010 Said :
cass2010 It's Good
On June 14th 2008 MissCheerCap Said :
MissCheerCap i like it mucho! not kidding! lol please kmp on the poems! love your work much! Haleylynn
On June 14th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx This is amazing..
On May 26th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Drowning in a sea of emotion. I loved it!
On April 29th 2008 thethreatIF Said :
thethreatIF wow! the passion and imagery... wow!
On April 16th 2008 JWalker2406 Said :
JWalker2406 Awesome poem! Sorry it's taken me a while to read it. :D Really like it though.
On March 16th 2008 lordidiot Said :
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i like ur style. its very good.
On March 11th 2008 212084734617 Said :
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wow this is a really great poem. It really gives off emotion and feeling.
On March 10th 2008 momsrule Said :
momsrule wow, i love it! (:
On March 8th 2008 penquindiver Said :
penquindiver this is a great poem also. like i said on blackened rose, the words are great, and it's like the poem came to life on the computer screen. GREAT JOB! im working on a new poem right now, and when I'm done, can u read it for me and tell me how it is?
On March 4th 2008 JohniRein Said :
JohniRein Same comment as with the blackened rose. Though I think this is just like a continuation of that? or that of this?
On March 3rd 2008 sparklefungurl Said :
sparklefungurl .....speechless.....:)
On March 2nd 2008 startart123 Said :
startart123 i loved this one too
On March 2nd 2008 jessicaciro Said :
jessicaciro one word...wow.
On March 2nd 2008 timewatch Said :
timewatch very good poem. i feel the same way.
On March 2nd 2008 smlesarahsmile Said :
smlesarahsmile Eh... same as the other one. the words themselfs are good. not the poem in whole
On March 2nd 2008 oz10norrid Said :
oz10norrid wow that is amazing
On March 1st 2008 lillex64 Said :
lillex64 execellent! it kinda reminds me of some of my poems..
On February 29th 2008 tony5tymz Said :
tony5tymz once again a very well spoken writ
On February 29th 2008 kinkybitch101 Said :
kinkybitch101 this is a good one to...i love how u get the feeling across and i love ur emotion in it...
On February 29th 2008 latashanicole1 Said :
latashanicole1 i like this one also...=]]...
On February 29th 2008 latashanicole1 Said :
latashanicole1 i like this one also...=]]...
On February 29th 2008 MonkeyLover115 Said :
MonkeyLover115 wow this one is really great too!!!!!!!