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Despite All You See....

Views (2549) Pain Created on 8-19-07 Flag

This world has had its way with me,and my bleeding shallow heart can't feel a thing.

Their lies which have bound me still, are now engraved upon my heart and control my will.

All the warmth of love is gone,and this emptiness and fear have left me numb.

Despite everything you see in me,the regrets of my past still lurk beneath.

Just strengthen my heart so that it feels no pain when my world starts to crash down again.

Show me the way so that i may follow despite all my fears and doubts within.

This is my end,this is where i lose it all and all the cares of my life just weigh me down causing me to fall.

The farther that i wander from here,the closer i am to the pain i see as dear.

I wait for the endknowing that there is nothing i can do.

Your love moves in and removes all the things in me that aren't of you..

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On April 3rd 2008 NightLifeGurl Said :
NightLifeGurl wow wonderful =]
On February 27th 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said :
AngelOfNight47 wow that's amazing as usual.
On February 22nd 2008 ypod Said :
ypod nice twist I loved it!
On January 23rd 2008 imanemogirl Said :
imanemogirl 3 words:wow,and,ow this hit home hard
On January 17th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth This is really good. I've just randomly picked a couple to look at, but sometime soon I'll have to look more of your work. :)
On December 30th 2007 themisskayla Said :
themisskayla thats awesome... i hope u comment my poemes too.. and im sorry i never read em b4...
On December 21st 2007 Smarties4 Said :
Smarties4 Fantastically awesome!
On December 5th 2007 Realmuckoy Said :
Realmuckoy this is so awesome dude.. i think this one of your best ones... I love the way everything fits together in your poems... You're awesome bro... :)
On November 28th 2007 rikudeepdive Said :
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kind of sounds like Deteriorate by Demon Hunter.
On November 4th 2007 rubyjean16 Said :
rubyjean16 sad but very good
On November 4th 2007 kellyjob Said :
kellyjob Also sad, but very good!
On October 12th 2007 brooklynn42017 Said :
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wow, this is really good. it takes time to appreciate poetry. and this is jus, dang. it is very in depth. =] i enjoyed it very much.
On October 11th 2007 SexyGirls101 Said :
SexyGirls101 good poem!!! very nice!!!
On October 6th 2007 comacozi101 Said :
comacozi101 this is really awesome...
On October 5th 2007 stealmecutey Said :
stealmecutey mournful but wonderful..
On October 2nd 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 Wow makes me think of my EX..but i like it
On September 30th 2007 cheesyma Said :
cheesyma this is deep as my grandma wuld say llz but good tho
On September 29th 2007 chrsbllmy Said :
chrsbllmy Again, very deep. I hope you have some happiness in your life. You are very talented.
On September 29th 2007 raceinggirl5 Said :
raceinggirl5 good poem
On September 29th 2007 ididntdoitatal Said :
ididntdoitatal you were born to be a poet you are deep i love it
On September 29th 2007 assumetheworst Said :
assumetheworst this one is great ^^ love it
On September 28th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said :
xxxAngelicaxxx this is really good
On September 27th 2007 JenTheObscure Said :
JenTheObscure I like this a lot, your wording is great, and I like the way it comes together at the end.
On September 27th 2007 zodiac3892 Said :
zodiac3892 awsome.. i liked it alot. also im vote number 100 yay :P
On September 26th 2007 pru1989 Said :
pru1989 Thats really good it is very balanced with wording emotion ect good job