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A Lonly Storm
The rain falls onto an unsuspecting girl
As the rain falls a dark feeling falls upon her
A feeling of hopelessness that drags her down
The rain thunders on for days
Showing no signs of stopping
She looks at every possible angle
But can see no way out of the storm
She franticly looks in every direction for her friends
But every where she looks her friends seem to have left her
She wonders why her friends are no where in sight
In reality her friends are right beside her every second
But the storm has grown so heavy she is blinded by it
She thinks she is all alone so she does not do anything
She simply sits herself down and hopes to God someone will help
Hopes that someone will see through all the anger she puts out
| On February 23rd 2008 lisaljb Said : | |
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touching, wow, very nice! |
| On August 11th 2007 kjoy428 Said : | |
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i ilke this one! it's something that a lot of people can relate to! great job! |
| On August 11th 2007 sugarpop1988 Said : | |
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Wow, this one is really good. I love this one......thats not saying much cus i love all of your stuff, but this one is my favorite......just, WOW!!!! |


