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A Lonly Storm

Views (70) Fear Created on 8-9-07 Flag

The rain falls onto an unsuspecting girl

As the rain falls a dark feeling falls upon her

A feeling of hopelessness that drags her down

The rain thunders on for days

Showing no signs of stopping

She looks at every possible angle

But can see no way out of the storm

She franticly looks in every direction for her friends

But every where she looks her friends seem to have left her

She wonders why her friends are no where in sight

In reality her friends are right beside her every second

But the storm has grown so heavy she is blinded by it

She thinks she is all alone so she does not do anything

She simply sits herself down and hopes to God someone will help

Hopes that someone will see through all the anger she puts out

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On February 23rd 2008 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb touching, wow, very nice!
On August 11th 2007 kjoy428 Said :
kjoy428 i ilke this one! it's something that a lot of people can relate to! great job!
On August 11th 2007 sugarpop1988 Said :
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Wow, this one is really good. I love this one......thats not saying much cus i love all of your stuff, but this one is my favorite......just, WOW!!!!