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Tearing me apart
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Created on 7-27-07
I see her with her beauty teasing me
As if saying I’m no good
I try to make her see me
But it seems when ever she does I make it worse
I see her happy
And I see her sad
She seeks comfort from the others in her life
I ask why I am not the one she goes to
And seem to get no answers
Only a feeling of jealousy comes my way
Making me suffer
Burning me up from the inside out
Tearing me apart as I look at her
And think of nothing but her
I have these horrible feelings
But no words to express them
Please Login to post comments| On February 23rd 2008 lisaljb Said : | |
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It wasn't emo, it was emotional, and I enjoyed it! |
| On December 24th 2007 Avarose189 Said : | |
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You have so much talent in you...I know that you will go far in this world....plez keep writing |
| On August 5th 2007 savethesunrise Said : | |
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That... was too emo for me. Sorry, but if you want a girl to notice you just go freaking talk to her. and tell her. girls like guys to try to get to know them. and who knows, you might get to know her and not like her for what she truely is. |
| On August 5th 2007 sk8errose21 Said : | |
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Oh my gosh, Stew!!! That is such a good poem, you truly have talent!:) |
