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Tender love from gentle hands

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Pure ecstasy

Views (216) Passion Created on 3-8-08 Flag

 Tender love from gentle hands
The warm breath from a loving man  
Softly stroking my cheek
You help me forget my worries of the week 
Gently removing my clothes with your impish grin
I close my eyes and soak the passion in  
Finding a rhythm that suits me fine
With every stroke I clear my mind 
One moment of pure ecstasy sets it all free
My heart finally clear and my mind finally at peace
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On March 16th 2008 SHELBiiLOVE Said :
SHELBiiLOVE love it =]
On March 14th 2008 pjjustin Said :
pjjustin this is beautiful, i simply love it!
On March 14th 2008 Sexymomma0227 Said :
Sexymomma0227 really it was good i actually can realate to that
On March 13th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said :
PeterSteeleYum I adore this poem. [:
On March 10th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 wow this is peaceful yet amazing! *thumbs up*
On March 10th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll I love this~ It helped sooth my headache :) Nice job!
On March 9th 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane This sets a serene scene in my mind. I love the softness! Nice job~
On March 9th 2008 Kep89 Said :
Kep89 i love it
On March 9th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord loved this!! Soft and beautiful
On March 8th 2008 LuvFaithHope Said :
LuvFaithHope this is really really really gud :)
On March 8th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Beautiful.
On March 8th 2008 xxxAngelicaxxx Said :
xxxAngelicaxxx very nice. i really like this one
On March 8th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said :
crazygirl2313 aww, thas good
On March 8th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem I love this it's so peaceful! Nice work!