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Created on 3-6-08
Something hides so darkYou would never guess It’s my heartA creature I hide Don’t dare to take a look inside It’s the monster that’s inside of meLurking and starring waiting to be set freeTo show itself and all my painTumbling down on my head like fierce rain I keep him under lock and key But he still seems to talk to meWanting me to release my rageWaiting for me to open his cage Just let him out and they will seeWhat all the hurt in life has done to meTaunting and teasing Smiling for the releasing
Please Login to post comments| On March 16th 2008 SHELBiiLOVE Said : | |
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really good. like the ryhmes |
| On March 9th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I love this one-very nice flow and creativity. But if you never release everything pent up inside, how will you ever love again?? I do really like this write! |
| On March 7th 2008 icsgrad07 Said : | |
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wow! |
| On March 7th 2008 adammckiel2000 Said : | |
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i love this i really do...especially your word choice |
| On March 7th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Amazng choice in wording~ Loved it! |
| On March 7th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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the beast inside us all some of us can lock them away some .... can't Great work!! |
| On March 6th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said : | |
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wow thats REALLY good!!! |
| On March 6th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Love it! Great choice of words. |
| On March 6th 2008 LuvFaithHope Said : | |
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i wish i can help |
| On March 6th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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wow... Amazin! Yeah I love it! A+ |
